Wednesday, February 10, 2010

Breath

This week the prompt for Haiku Bones is Breath......
I suppose it's my Gemini ways (would that make me "zodiacally" predisposed?)...but I can't help but think of it in 2 very different way..........

First Haiku that immediately came to mind:


Ethereal Breath
oscillates mid earth and sky
uncertain of it's place


The second:


smiling he whispers
love, you take my breath away..............
Marlboro Light lit

3 comments:

Tumblewords: said...

Wonderful imagery in these two 'ku!

Anonymous said...

The first one is beautiful. The second, so true.

Magical Mystical Teacher said...

take my breath away
toss it to the roaring wind—
ah, see it skitter


Breathing Light